Highlighting grammar and language errors in a given text about GOOG and MSFT.

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😎 Find grammar or writing issues in this text:

Great analysis like all other HTMM videos. My take is that the focus on subscription revenue vs advertising revenue is a double-edged sword. Advertising is a battle that MSFT is losing to GOOG. Your videos, for instance, have millions of viewers on YouTube… and each of them is watching at least an ad that will generate revenue for GOOG. Also, if any follower wants to find your work on any of your social channels, including LinkedIn, they’ll likely do it via Google search and be exposed to all their ads while doing so… and Google controls 39% of the Digital Advertising market. On the other hand, both GOOG and MSFT each other from their complementary social models: people pay LI subscriptions to comment this post rather than comment the YouTube video, because this channel gives more visibility, all while GOOG collects the ad revenue when we go to YouTube and watch the full video. Among other reasons, this is one why I always pick GOOG and MSFT in the “choose your fighter” surveys of AEI

🤖 The text you’ve provided is quite clear, but there are a few areas where grammar or style could be improved for better clarity or correctness. Here’s a breakdown:

1. **Ambiguity and Clarity**:
– The phrase “HTMM videos” might be unclear to readers who are unfamiliar with this acronym. It would be better to spell out what HTMM stands for at the first mention.
– The phrase “people pay LI subscriptions to comment this post” might be unclear. It might be better to clarify what “LI” stands for and rephrase it to “comment on this post”.

2. **Word Choice**:
– The phrase “both GOOG and MSFT each other from their complementary social models” seems to be missing a verb and is unclear as written. It might be intended to say something like “both GOOG and MSFT benefit each other from their complementary social models”.

3. **Punctuation**:
– There are ellipses used in the text “… and each of them is watching at least an ad that will generate revenue for GOOG.” and “… and be exposed to all their ads while doing so…”. It’s more formal to end sentences with a period rather than ellipses unless there’s a stylistic reason for the ellipsis.
– There’s a space before the ellipsis in “… and each of them is watching at least an ad that will generate revenue for GOOG.” which could be removed for consistency.

4. **Consistency**:
– There’s inconsistency in how the company names are abbreviated. Initially, Microsoft is abbreviated as “MSFT”, but later it appears as “Msft”. It’s better to stick to one form.

5. **Verb Agreement**:
– The phrase “each of them is watching at least an ad” may read better as “each of them is watching at least one ad”.

6. **Sentence Structure**:
– The phrase “Among other reasons, this is one why I always pick GOOG and MSFT in the “choose your fighter” surveys of AEI” could be restructured for clarity. Perhaps: “This is one of several reasons why I always pick GOOG and MSFT in the “choose your fighter” surveys conducted by AEI.”

7. **Spacing**:
– There is an extra space in “because this channel gives more visibility,”. It should be “because this channel gives more visibility,”.

In summary, addressing these issues would help in making the text more precise, clear, and grammatically correct.

😎 The reason to abbreviate some times is because it’s a social media post with a limit of characters. You did not respond to the question. I was asking you to find grammar and language errors. You mostly provided advice, not pointed out at errors. Sending a new version. Spot errors and highlight only errors. It’s very time consuming to read such a long tex you provided:

Great analysis like all other HTMM videos. My take is that the focus on subscription revenue vs advertising revenue is a double-edged sword. Advertising is a battle that MSFT is losing to GOOG. Your videos, for instance, have millions of viewers on YouTube, and each of them is watching at least an ad that will generate revenue for GOOG. Also, if any follower wants to find your work on any of your social channels, including LinkedIn, they’ll likely do it via Google search and be exposed to all their ads while doing so… and Google controls 39% of the Digital Advertising market. On the other hand, both GOOG and MSFT benefit each other from their complementary social models: some people are paying LI subscriptions and choose to comment on this post rather than comment on YouTube, because this channel gives more visibility, all while GOOG collects the ad revenue when we go to YouTube and watch the full video. Among other reasons, this is one why I always pick GOOG and MSFT in the “choose your fighter” surveys of AEI.

🤖 1. “…subscription revenue vs advertising revenue…” – Extra space between “vs” and “advertising.”
2. “…at least an ad…” – It would be clearer as “at least one ad.”
3. “…they’ll likely do it via Google search and be exposed to all their ads while doing so…” – Ellipses are informal; consider using a period or semicolon.
4. “On the other hand, both GOOG and MSFT benefit each other from their complementary social models:” – Consider removing “each other from” as it’s redundant.
5. “…some people are paying LI subscriptions and choose to comment on this post rather than comment on YouTube,…” – “LI” should be spelled out if this is the first mention, or if the abbreviation hasn’t been clarified prior.
6. “…this is one why I always pick GOOG and MSFT…” – Consider revising to “this is one reason why I always pick GOOG and MSFT…” for clarity.

😎 “Ellipses are informal”… is that pointing out an error? Please clarify if you can respond based on the prompt instructions or not

🤖 Apologies for the oversight. The use of ellipses isn’t technically an error, but rather a stylistic choice. I should have adhered strictly to highlighting grammatical and language errors as per your request. Thank you for bringing this to my attention.

🤖 I understand your request for a focus on grammatical and language errors. Here are the errors identified in the provided text:

1. Extra space in “vs advertising.”
2. “at least an ad” should be “at least one ad.”
3. The phrase “benefit each other from” is awkward. A correct form could be “benefit from.”
4. The abbreviation “LI” is not previously defined.
5. “this is one why I” should be “this is one reason why I.”

😎 Number 4 is not an error. You don’t need to know what LI means. You don’t k ow the context of the conversation this text is part of. The reader knows. Sending the prompt and text again:

The reason to abbreviate some times is because it’s a social media post with a limit of characters. You did not respond to the question. I was asking you to find grammar and language errors. You mostly provided advice, not pointed out at errors. Sending a new version. Spot errors and highlight only errors. It’s very time consuming to read such a long tex you provided:

Great analysis like all other HTMM videos. My take is that the focus on subscription revenue vs advertising revenue is a double-edged sword. Advertising is a battle that MSFT is losing to GOOG. Your videos, for instance, have millions of viewers on YouTube, and each of them is watching at least an ad that will generate revenue for GOOG. Also, if any follower wants to find your work on any of your social channels, including LinkedIn, they’ll likely do it via Google search and be exposed to all their ads while doing so… and Google controls 39% of the Digital Advertising market. On the other hand, both GOOG and MSFT benefit each other from their complementary social models: some people are paying LI subscriptions and choose to comment on this post rather than comment on YouTube, because this channel gives more visibility, all while GOOG collects the ad revenue when we go to YouTube and watch the full video. Among other reasons, this is one why I always pick GOOG and MSFT in the “choose your fighter” surveys of AEI.

🤖 I apologize for the oversight. Here are the errors identified in the provided text:

1. Extra space in “vs advertising.”
2. “at least an ad” should be “at least one ad.”
3. The phrase “benefit each other from” should be corrected to “benefit from.”
4. “this is one why I” should be “this is one reason why I.”

😎 “On the other hand, both GOOG and MSFT benefit each other from their complementary social models”

The intent of this sentence is to say that the benefit is reciprocal. GOOG benefits from MSFT, MSFT benefits from GOOG. It’s a bit more complex than that and it’s the business model of the other what benefits each other. The alternative sentence you provided before is not correct, does not convey the meaning I explained. If the original is not correctly phrased, suggest another alternative

🤖 I understand your explanation. Given the reciprocal nature of the benefit, a more accurate rephrasing might be:

“On the other hand, both GOOG and MSFT mutually benefit from each other’s complementary social models.”

This way, the reciprocal benefit is maintained and the phrase is grammatically correct.

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