Grammar improvement for a professional message regarding DITINGY and COMPGY.
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😎 help me rewrite a sentence
🤖 Sure, I can help you rewrite a sentence! Please provide me with the sentence that you would like me to rewrite, and let me know what changes you are hoping to make.😎 improve the grammar: “I’m eager for my team at DITINGY to be better partners with COMPGY. Today I learnt we’ve not being doing it as good as I thought. I just saw your profile and your impressive experience at the company, so I will be honored if you accept my connection invite.”
🤖 Sure, I can help you improve the grammar of the sentence. Here’s a revised version:
“I am eager for my team at DITINGY to become better partners with COMPGY. Today, I learned that we have not been doing as well as I had thought. After seeing your impressive experience at the company on your profile, I would be honored if you would accept my connection invitation.”
Some of the key changes include using “become” instead of “be” to indicate a process of improvement, adding a comma after “Today” to separate the two clauses, and changing “not being” to “not been” to make the verb tense consistent. Additionally, I changed “it” to “as well” to clarify what the team has not been doing, and rephrased the last sentence to sound more natural.
Hugging Face Dataset Metrics
All the conversation prompts, responses, and metrics are available to download and explore on Hugging Face dataset reddgr/talking-to-chatbots-chats: